Thursday, December 24, 2009
Pages 8-end!
Here are the last pages. Please let us know what you think of the book. Do you think it's marketable? Would you buy it to read to YOUR children? Can we improve the story? Your input is appreciated! Thanks! And again, Merry Christmas to all of you from our families to yours!
Page 8: Aisley knew she had Ala now, “When I grow up, I’m gonna be THE PRESIDENT OF THE UNITED STATES!”
Page 9: Aisley stood back, very proud of herself. With arms crossed, hips cocked and nose high, she expected Ala to be speechless in defeat.
But Ala wasn’t...she never, EVER was....
Page 10: “When I grow up, I’m gonna be a singing, teaching, mermaid, doctor who becomes the first singing, teaching, mermaid, doctor, President of the United States!”
Page 11 (back page): THE END
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cute! I hear my grandaugters' personalities coming through. Will the words on the pages be typed or handwritten? I had difficulty reading the handwriting. The book is adorable!
ReplyDeletehi BGO thanx for your comment.
ReplyDeletethe words will be typed in the real/edited version. the drawings are only rough sketches and my storyboard.
♥natascha
It looks good. I think it will be a hit. I would gladly read it to my class at school.
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